When i saw you

A day had Come once 

when i found you 

as my dream pervaded flower

Thee blossomed and i saw you smile

as a Rose bud smirk

ever since i started gazing thee

Found my heart as a melting snow


saw you once

and my heart leaped and leaped

your beauty is the one i wished to glance

Restless mind and sleepless nights

spent it fine with great delight

your eyes sparkled as dew

on the lip of the lotus 

and my soul lit up

when your eyes glow

and it shines like stars in the night

your one warm touch shall

make my heart inevitable excite




Author: theonlysup

Self Motivated. Optimistic , Resilient . Sometimes emotional, most of the Time Happy :)

12 thoughts on “When i saw you”

    1. Teenage wali feeling aa gayi.. Hain na ?? I tried to keep it as simple as possible and convey the imagination.. Effectively.. Umm thank u so much shambhavi

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